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author Koduck
   
subjectPortrait
title Devil with Dimples
date11/18/2013 10:37:43 PM
detailsYou have seen her before.
I have not had any time to shoot but I enjoy editing images from this session.
A different approach to colors than before.
For some reason when I save for web in LR to make the image fit this site I am loosing a lot of color saturation in the finished jpeg. The original is more vibrant.
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1 Graham Mealand   (11/19/2013 2:06:23 AM)
I'd say your present image is vibrant indeed- if it had been posted earlier it would have scored well.
2 Tim Pereira ( T-Bear)   (11/19/2013 5:57:45 AM)
This looks really nice until you break it down, then, you see it needs more work in some places.

These lines,should go to match the rest of the skin. If you are going glamour, then all the face should be smooth.

The double catch light is bad. I would not have added thesebut lightened the natural ones.

A little sloppy work on the BG, looks like you blurred the BG out and thisis the effect from it.

When you softened the skin, you softened the hair too. I would not do that, it looks softened here. There should be more texture in the hair. Do not sharpen the hair either, just leave it natural.

Whitening the teeth and eyes would help, only a little, make it look natural. Also, these little highlights in the teethmight need to go to, that just something I do, not everyone takes that out.
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3 Geordie (Dean Wilson)   (11/19/2013 6:03:35 AM)
An excellent critique Tim and a little valuable lesson for us all! The pic and model are super as is the pose and obvious rapport.
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4 Naseer Fedaee (Kindness Cost Nothing..)   (11/19/2013 9:14:53 AM)
Excellent work and Tim said great.
5 Reidar   (11/19/2013 5:22:30 PM)
Cool!!
6 Mario Dias   (3/13/2014 11:45:06 AM)
Great comment from Tim.
Agree with all he said and adding this lightened effect that also troubles me
Anyway, it's a very original portrait and love the shooting angle and the expression.
It really deserves a revised version.
Cheers
7 GEORGE123   (12/13/2014 7:11:53 PM)
to me
it's horrible scary disaster
8 arinas74   (2/2/2016 1:12:20 PM)
I don't know if that was the idea, but to me, her expression makes her look like an evil person (in a cartoony way, like Cruella DeVille)
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